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"Aliens come to earth"
First and leading, this was one of the funniest and most humorous scripts I have read
When I started reading, I wasn't sure whether to think of the script as a live deed comedy or a vigorous piece. As i read further, it became clear that live action was suitable.
In a script like this, it was amazing that the feature that caught my attention the most was the beautiful love story.
As for the comedy, other than the fact that I have seen alot of it before, it was very funny.
This is a great script, however, there were some questions and worries I ever had.
First and primary, there were many technical problems with your format. Most notably, you need to write a logline for every single scene change.
A few times you would write one scene and they write "LATER". What you need to do is write the second slug line like this.
EXIT: Frat house kitchen-Later
Also, make sure that before you send a script to anyone to read, much less a making executive, make sure you edit and proofread your script. There were some errors.
I wouldn't use the term "How'd you like them apples?". You didn't originally come up with it and its been scalded.
Consider how much English the aliens know when they enter the planet. I wasn't sure how realistic the fact that they learned the language so seamlessly. How are they attentive of "dollars"?
Finally, the first act seemed way to similar to a Dan Akroyd Chevy Chase Saturday Night Live skit. That part lacked some originality.
Overall, a very funny script, but you need to reread it and add something that makes it more innovative as opposite to just another "Aliens come to earth" film.
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